Tuesday, January 19, 2010

How can i make my sentence much more interesting, What does a child deserve, ecstasy or misery?

1st>> does it make u want to read the rest? i think its kinda bad, so plz help me out here... i still want the same thing asked but maybe something more interesting added to it..?

I'm writing an essay about childhood loss/ growing up too quickly and this is how I'm planning to open it up (first sentence). Ecstasy= meaning a happy normal childhood and misery= a child growing up without knowing what a toy is or sports.


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